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Damn you

and your loops.
Make a full song thats this good all the way through... Then i will 5 you :)
As long as that is not done, im going to have to 4 you :S
Its up to you xD

hopeku responds:

well i make loops because it's for videogame music. If you wanna hear a full song I submitted jew gold (2010 edit) on the portal not so long ago!

Thanks!

Nice song with a minor drawback

Its a nice calm song i would say... but i cant enjoy it too much since you have forgotten to turn on the low-pass filter :). Just too much high-end for me, im more of a warm-zone kinda guy (lotsa stuff in warm :D ). Otherwise its a really conveniant piece and i quite like it...
Good job on this one :) (you can teach me your FX skillz in the collab xD)

-Minor Light

Very cooool

Another nice one. Though i must say i am displeased by your drums... again. (especially the hi-hat whaever) Synths are top notch again, just love the gates in here...
Keep up the good work mate!

TheComet responds:

yeah I need new instruments XD

Got a DnB track in the works right now for track #500, I made a downright wild reese for it o.o

Synth luv :3

Damn ive always loved your synths, really good ones here too. Only one problem would be the drums which are getting old and dont really suit this song. Other then that, GJ :)

-Minor Light

TheComet responds:

My drums in this are only 5 years old! XD

Yeah, I need to update my percussion instruments pretty damn soon, some of them I've overused more than that piano

Pressed the play button

Thought: "OMG not again those hip-hop/pop crappy songs posted in the DnB section" but then in 0:40 it went bit hype :D
Make it longer, dont use guitar(use synths or i will zero-bomb you :P), check out my WIP that i dont have the inspiration to finish:S, and you will be just fine :D

combatplayer responds:

lol a well preformed guitar lead can be quite epic with a good ground of synths. dont underestimate real physical instruments lol. if the guitar thing doesnt work out it will be synth though. and ill also have to go over the drums again at some point.

Wrong genre

The song isnt very good, very basic stuff. Improve before posting again...

OMG how long do i hate to write this stuff...

This is not Drum and Bass. Please check wikipedia or even youtube just for details since im not going to write anymore :S

voted

Some trancy 8-bit(maybe 16-bit) mu...crap
The snare should be replaced.
Bass should be more audible and kicky
Everything else should be improved on...

stefevr responds:

ok thanks for the review

On the right way

Well you are on the right way i would say...
Things to improve on:
More variety (synths, samples, patterns n stuff)
More audible bass (a MUST)
Fill the gaps(soundgaps that is. atm its bass, drums, some high white noise :P and in the middlerange there is nothing)
Thats should help you quite alot on this track unless you intend on doing something else with this track :P

zenodio responds:

I'll see what i can do, this is nothing near finished. Thanks for the constructive critism, i knew pretty much all of this from the beginning, just missed the middle-range instruments. Thanks man =)

do.

as said below or just lower the pitch of the snare, that should also work...

There is just nothing better then deep basses and evolving pads - D'n'B for short :D

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